Empty Soul

Hi, Aria! Welcome and if that's you in the picture then you have a nice, smiling face. A pleasant picture indeed. Me, I'm an ugly life form from another world that most humans find repulsive so I simply use an humorous image. :)

Words are powerful things. Do you want a review of your two chapters from the perspective of the story and how you've written it or do you want some affirmation from the world that not everyone will shred your ego to pieces unnecessarily? Be honest. It will help everyone including you. Also, please, never again put add an author's note asking for reviews but suggesting that everyone ignore bad grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.. That is not received well by some writers that you might want to look at your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Hi, Aria! Welcome and if that's you in the picture then you have a nice, smiling face. A pleasant picture indeed. Me, I'm an ugly life form from another world that most humans find repulsive so I simply use an humorous image. :)

Words are powerful things. Do you want a review of your two chapters from the perspective of the story and how you've written it or do you want some affirmation from the world that not everyone will shred your ego to pieces unnecessarily? Be honest. It will help everyone including you. Also, please, never again put add an author's note asking for reviews but suggesting that everyone ignore bad grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.. That is not received well by some writers that you might want to look at your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago