A Razors Edge

Newest song I'm writing on my guitar,

This is still a work in progress...

 

 

Verse 1

Can you see the signs,

They're everywhere - in everyone's make believe.

I don't want to be the one to tear apart your dreams -

That we wasted.

We're wasting away.

 

Pre-Chorus

 

Silent beauty;

It follows me,

It swallows me.

The sirens sing sad songs of cruelty,

There's a sign at the end of the road.

 

Chorus

 

Take a step 

Back and let it go.

Stagnant sleep release these ghosts.

But I won't let

Their poison seep 

Deep inside my soul, an emotional overflow

Of razor blades and pin pricks.

A bloody color of rust.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Just want to know what you think?

Reviews

[Personne]

I love the imagery. I'd love to hear the music with it. If it were a song, I'd probably listen to it. I think I like the pre - chorus the best though(:

[Demi Rose]

imaginative lyrics. i have to recommend this to a friend.

[Dove]

I think these are beautiful lyrics. I can imagine someone singing those words. Great song so far, keep it going. I would love to read it when its completely finished.