Cause and Effect.

Where do we go - we don't know where we've been.

    We fight and we struggle - afflictions within.

We wine and we whimper - it's simple; we blame.

    Pointing our fingers - we linger in vain.

Lying and cheating - the backstabbers game.

    With morals and karma - we're drivin insane.

Our actions and motives -  determine our fate.

    But we kill and we steal - raising prisons with rage.

When we're lost we lose all - missing visions of change.

    Insanity, calamities - Both awkward and strange. 

We're imprisoned - division - separate but same. 

    Duality? Reality? - Fortune and fame.

We like it, it's Nike - It's all in the name.

    Fabricated fashion - Selling pennies to slaves.

But it's all in "his" plan -  So thank God we plan well.

    We just ask for forgiveness - and we won't rot in - sssshhh......

Now I open my eyes - We've seen quite a show.

    Stay peaceful, don't struggle - Just let the past go.

Share wine, share hope - it's simple; with trust.

   Hold hands, come together - and linger in love.

Spread truth, help out - it's anyone's game.

    With morals and Dharma - release all this pain.

Take action, move mountains - we can make our own way.

    Bring life, plant a seed - give more than you take.

If your lost, reach out - because we're all holding hands.

    Intelligence, integrity - moving onward as planned.

We have risen -ambition - we have faith were we stand.

    The truth, it speaks softly - "now you know who I am."

We like it, enlightened - growing better with age.

    But it's work and it's hard - But the hard work will pay. 

Our negative deeds form negative waves - 

Until it rots and it blisters and festers for days.

Where positive acts will shine light on this haze.

      Remember...

It's cause and effect, Karma's kiss of decay.

     

Author's Note

I almost never write in rhyme. Probably my first fully, rhyme and rhythmical poem... So be honest

Reviews

[Personne]

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That was one of the best poems I've ever in my entire life. I read it out loud and sounded SO BEAUTIFUL. Then the last line "It's cause and effect and effect, Karma's kiss of decay." And it was just you gave me a huge burn. Like, talking the best kind of smack. I just love thisssssssssssss. Great/Awesome/Amazing poem. Everything is perfect. It couldn't get better. Your hard work shines through.

[Zee Noir]

Your writing is immaculate...keep up the good work ;]

[L]

Your rhyme is excellent. The rhythm is so good I can't read it without hearing it being rapped :) I like the movement from negative to positive and I especially like that last line, well done :)

[Dove]

This is an amazing poem I love it theres nothing bad about it. The rhymes were right on point and everything made perfect sense. Very nice, spectacular job!