A Different Perspective

A Different Perspective

A Poem by Sorry Sits Here
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My hands are shaking a terrible truth. 
- When the wind whispers hello, 
I wave back into the sea- 
I breath in the sights long left and forgotten. 
I am calm now for the moon has shown his face- 
and I am free to be myself; 
where no shadows dare hide, 
the worlds blemishes turn to beauty 
and every plastic personality begins to rot and decay. 
I whisper one more solemn breath 
"It feels good to be alive."

© 2011 Sorry Sits Here


Author's Note

Sorry Sits Here
I would like any kind of criticism, ideas, corrections, suggestions, compliments or anything else you can think of. After all that's why I'm here. Just please leave something - I appreciate any comment.

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Added on September 23, 2011
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Sorry Sits Here
Sorry Sits Here

Trenton, Ontario, Canada



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I have been writing poetry for several years, although the bulk of my writing started after some creative writing classes I took in college. Most of my poems are free written on the spot with no parti.. more..

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