Too bad (metaphor)

It's a shame when no one comes to the game and the season's on the line

So much work and not a jerk shows up to see the outcome in fine

As on to the field you do run, no starting gun, the other team didn't come

No fans in the stands no playing of the bands, no foe to succumb

A shocker so back to the locker, team heads looking at their feet

With no one to blame there will be no fame, without playing another defeat

Reviews

[Beren]

Wow. Deep and carries so much in it. Every line has a different story to tell. One of my favorite of your poems sir!

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your read and comprehension it is most appreciated.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

let others run amok on us....the fans have already left...we are on our own...no rally caps...just digging out of the hole we have reamed for ourselves.
j.

[Soren]

Thanks Jacob I appreciate the read yesterday was poetry day and few people showed up.

[Inkspire]

short and simple...
Anticlimatic acceptance of defeat.
To me it reflects on missed opportunities and defeat due to unnoticed efforts we make.( This is just my interpretation)
The sattire and metaphor is quite catchy.

[Soren]

Thank you so much I appreciate the read and comment. Yes indeed yesterday poetry day and very few fans showed up