Relics of the lost

Relics of the lost

A Poem by Soren

Scales of gray spill over aging hours of a waning day
Descending clouds, blur, a fading edge of realities photograph
Smoky ash colored fog leaves grainy images in a wintry feel of time
In mist of the eye the world dissolves, blindness falls
A memory folded to be put away, bent corners of another day
Deteriorated bits of today, the past long missed, now so tenderly kissed
To be stored, till tomorrow's dawn, in a dusty drawer
Where only the mind has the key

© 2025 Soren


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" the past long missed, now tenderly kissed "- eloquent lines (my response simply stated... ain't that the truth ) I think perhaps there comes an age when this truth is probably known by all but not until you are close enough to have a vision of yourself as a relic of the past. First four lines paint a physical portrait of the inner reality of the last four - nicely penned -carl

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Soren

2 Days Ago

Thank you Carl your words mean a great deal and are highly valued
A starkly poignant and beautiful write. A day fading in black&white, longing for fresh yesterdays. I can identify.

Posted 2 Days Ago


Soren

2 Days Ago

Thank you Dylan for the read and most kind words of support that are most appreciated

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