Night visitor

Night visitor

A Poem by Soren

Ghost moth what message do you bring
carried from night on haunted white wing?
Notice from a spirit lost, searching for a place to rest
Past love long departed forgotten but still possessed
A sheet of paper falling out of night shade trees
circling, dropping, lolling on gypsy breeze
Born on breath of darkness, carried by mystery's wind
Night's shadow a black grave for past days sinned
Cracked casket of day emits a flash of white
A phantom flies as a spectre in darkest midnight  

© 2025 Soren


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There's always something, mysterious about your writing style that makes every piece you write enjoyable.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Soren

3 Weeks Ago

I thank you for your read and comment. It is in mystery that the mind searches for answers and atten.. read more
Mysterious, love it. It seems like a soul is asking for help, or I don't get it well.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Soren

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the read and comment that would be the most common way to see it.
You are so deft at writing poems that have a mysterious aura to them.
And I love that genre.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much Jacob I've been accused by those close to me of being mysterious and hard to read,.. read more

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Added on February 1, 2025
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