A twist of the tongue

A twist of the tongue

A Poem by Soren

I long to catch a poem's tail just to hear it wail
verse with soft paws, rhyme with teeth and clause
some are classical purebred others wild prose naturally bred
dark or pale with a scraggling tail
body of nouns, feet of verbs that an adjective's shadow disturbs
I love mangling its participle dangling
with conjunctions of fur, how seductively they purr
she's measured in meter I wouldn't mistreat her
their subordination hides in shade of coordination
baited with a preposition revealing its past condition
rare creatures of a bard's work, in word's forest they lurk
its syntax presently tense, with muscular metaphors so dense
here a grammatical growl becomes an etymological howl
as by tongue assisted, poetry's tail is twisted

© 2025 Soren


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Brilliant work. I love this personification and metaphor.

Posted 1 Hour Ago


I love the use of personification in this poem about a living breathing beast of poetry. This is creativity that allowed me to visualize the beast that is being chased.

Posted 15 Hours Ago


Soren

7 Hours Ago

Thanks so much for the read and comment they are most appreciated
Poetic Beauty

4 Hours Ago

You are welcome. It was an enjoyable read and creative is word choices and descriptions

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