My kind of music

Raw bleeding, slashed, ripped from the soul

Gospel wail howling primal travail

Blue whispers blowing through grass 

Sonorous taste of strings

Gravel voice, shredding rock, digging up buried emotions scaling major peaks

A musical knife clefs disembowels visceral memories 

Unfolding innards falling, in new waves raising hair, ethereal, haunting 

Combed with folk ballads buried in jazzy tangles in a hurricane of sound

Bound in dark minor chords with a fist full of keys 

Uncontrolled shivers rap overtaking, breathless breaking and shaking

Resurrected primitive lost country throbbing beats, grungy classical melodies 

Poetic nirvana pops in savage orgasmic note slides and runs

No shiny mechanical chains staining these notes

Rare, never overcooked

Still alive

Drums ghostly heartbeats

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Your words are near enough brimful of music, it moods and gifts; all clearly offered. Share reader.. and feel.

'Unfolding innards falling, in new waves raising hair, ethereal, haunting
Combed with folk ballads buried in jazzy tangles in a hurricane of sound
Bound in dark minor chords with a fist full of keys
Uncontrolled shivers rap overtaking, breathless breaking and shaking
Resurrected primitive lost country throbbing beats, grungy classical melodies
Poetic nirvana pops in savage orgasmic note slides and runs
No shiny mechanical chains staining these notes
Rare, never overcooked
Still alive'

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp painting of the scene.

[Soren]

Thanks so much for the read and comment Thomas

[MCS]

Powerful write, I felt these words reverberate in my being. I feel a touch of this when I stand at my easel. Well done dear poet!

[Soren]

Thank you so much for the review and kind words they are most appreciated

[MCS]

It was a pleasure reading!

[Dylan Macadham]

Yes, Music is, and comes from, the soul ... the soundtrack of our Ups and Downs.
Impactful write!

[Soren]

Thanks so much for the read and comment it is most appreciated

[Einstein Noodle]

still alive and pushing the limits ... a place for everyone's favorite and not a fan of ;) i really like the overview and wide scope your poem covers in the world of music and styles .. thank you for sharing Sir Soren
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[Soren]

Thanks Einstein for the review and most kind words of support. Yea it's not that I like all music but I like all types. What I dislike is the new habbit of altering music with autotune and pitch correction taking the soul out of it and they are going back and remastering old artists to make each note perfect in pitch. This is not how it was sung and makes it mechanical. If it is recognized as a masterpiece why touch up the Mona Lisa? Write some more poems my friend

[Arundass TP]

Very hard music I feel. Like heavy drum beats. I think there is an inner meaning hidden in this poem. Great writing

[Soren]

You are so right about the inner meaning. It gives a heavy feeling but it is the rawness that lies at the core and although I love all types of music when it is altered afterward in production it looses its meaning to me. It is a matter of taste I like my steaks rare to taste the meat not overcooked and doctored with sauces to take the taste away

[Arundass TP]

Welcome friend 😊