Night

Night dressed in sparkling light 

A velvet sequined gown surrounds

A glowing smiling face

Whispers blown from a lost voice past

A sultry kiss of a siren breeze

Memories echo from a shadowy grave

Covered in a soft dark blanket of time 

Where the dirt of years

Covers a casket of rotting fears

Watered with golden tears

Molten light pouring from sunrise

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

A twist and turn poem. Nicely written

[Soren]

Thank you so much I appreciate your reading and review and yes, a poem with more than one meaning has more than one worth

[Chris Shaw]

A poem of beautiful contrasts. Lovely poetic expression which touches this reader on a number of levels. Lovely, Soren.

Chris

[Soren]

Thank you, Chris. Your words serve as great support and are deeply appreciated.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

there's too much i like about this that i dont know where to start. it is extremely clever, the way images and wods work both against and for each other. i shall re-read this work in a later time, maybe i will find my voice then, but for now i leave you with a BRAVO!

[Soren]

Thank you so much your words humble me again. You’re a review service great inspiration for further writing and I thank you for that.