How?

How can you walk away from a glorious day?

It was filled with musk from the approaching dusk

It was so bright with growing light

'Twas night with insidious fright

Beams of light warming transforming

By darkness hidden, terror ridden

So calm, full of balm

Griping black hold of cold

Infant day's glisten morning christen

Rain's flood births mud

Can you walk away from a perfect day?

In the shade you made I'll stay

Reviews

[Kanwal]

Beautifully capturing all the emotion and contrast of light and darkness." I will stay" Perfect.

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your review and most kind comment. It is deeply appreciated.

[Kanwal]

Most Welcome!

[Martiya Daman]

Such a striking portrayal of the delicate balance between light and darkness, peace and fear. The imagery is vivid, especially in how you capture the fleeting moments of a perfect day and the contrasting emotions that come with nightfall. I love how you express the idea of staying in the comfort of the shade created by the day’s warmth and light. Beautifully written Soren!

[Soren]

You got it! Thanks for the perceptive read and how some see the dark and others the light. It is most appreciated