Differences

Differences

A Poem by Soren

Battered square peg in a round hole, a bleating lamb lies with a roaring lion
drip of water on a burning coal, Mohamed moved to Zion
Pull knotted rope through a needle's eye, a dry cactus in a marsh
If not on an elephant then on a horse fly, a glove velvet harsh
Color red green, close to blue yellow
Draw the unseen, a girl now a fellow
Opposites attract flies, truth lays with lies
dressed in harlequin disguise when the fading shadow dies

© 2024 Soren


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A wonderful thought provoking write filled choc-o-bloc with opposites (differences). As you so poetically say in the seventh line of the poem, opposites attract just like the positive and negative in a battery. Two positives or two negatives won't work, it takes one of each. Our world is full of contradictions, dear Soren and you have sublimely embroidered a few of them into this flawlessly inked poem. Great work! Thank you for sharing, dear friend

Posted 1 Week Ago


Soren

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much Marie your reviews are most gracious and are deeply appreciated
Marie

1 Week Ago

Most welcome always, Soren and thank you again for sharing...
They say that opposites attract but I've noticed many moths are flummoxed by a candle flame; thinking it, some greater light. Perspective is everything. I enjoyed the read. F.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Soren

1 Week Ago

Thanks Fabian for the read and yes your are right it's all in a point of view.
It's nice to read...
But we call it as black sheep...

Truth lies inside the lies so opposite do attracts and then flies flyers 😅..

Color red green sure important , don't Jammed 😅

Thought provoking write... :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


Soren

1 Week Ago

Thank you Jeyantni I appreciate your read and comment.
Jeyanthi

1 Week Ago

Welcome..
Sir..
😃
this was fun. a great play on words and a rocking beat.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Soren

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for reading this poem and for your words I am glad that you enjoyed it. Have a won.. read more
Soren great imagery, I liked this.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Soren

1 Week Ago

Thank you, Dave. I appreciate your review and your words of support. Have a wonderful day.

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