A twisted tale

Betrayal a serpent tail developing after birth

it slowly grows until it shows venom under mirth

Attacking the rear, a bite or whisper, lies hidden in disguise

catching its prey where they lay with lies of surprise

Coiled words catch trusting birds in their nest or as it flies

viper cold, sheds skin of old, revealing new scales of treacherous lies

the right, antidote for the bite, a serum of forgiveness

An enlightened savior excuses the behavior escaping future sickness

Reviews

[Marie]

A newborn is pure but with time and aging becomes corrupt? Lies are disguised as truth to catch its prey, as in lies are used as a trap to ensnare the innocent. Reborn again, just as a leopard does not change its spots, neither can this human being stop being who and what he is. The antidote to the lies he sprouts and the evil which ensues is Forgiveness. An enlightened person, someone who has dealt with this evil person and knows exactly what he is like, disregards the behaviour and is wise enough to avoid it in the future.
Hhhhmmmm! Not sure at all where I am going with this, Soren. I am inclined to head towards the USA, but think I've lost my way to be honest. Please forgive me! Your resplendent metaphoric gem has dazzled me in its perfection. Wonderful write, Soren and thank you for sharing, my friend...

[Soren]

Once again, thank you so much Marie. Yes, you are on target with that interpretation and I believe that it is true. Thank you so much for your reading.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, Soren...