Window of a tear Ravin' ink prompt for Sat November 2, 2024

All around you is a poem its story to tell

a dew drop glistening, well even a hair

look deep into the depth of its spell

touch its beating heart, rivers of mystery it will share

A spider web will entrap you

brown leaves piled away

rusted form of a twisted screw

amber field of hay

Each has its own tale

Whispers, can you hear?

on the winds of a hurricane you will sail

new windows polished clear

Reviews

[Jeyanthi]

Nice thought...
Is it tear or tear of hair from the head...
What a twisted words... caught in web or flown away .. or setting sail... but you caught rightly in your paintbrush and drawn a poem here..
(Gonna clean my windows well the tiles too)

[Soren]

Thank you Jeyanthi tear or tear ambiguous let the reader decide. Hair the prompt is mentioned only once so the poem is nearly bald but you can miss something by a hair so I guess you can do something by a hair as well. Thanks so much for the read and help

[Jeyanthi]

Yeah... accurate!