Window of a tear Ravin' ink prompt for Sat November 2, 2024

All around you is a poem its story to tell

a dew drop glistening, well even a hair

look deep into the depth of its spell

touch its beating heart, rivers of mystery it will share

A spider web will entrap you

brown leaves piled away

rusted form of a twisted screw

amber field of hay

Each has its own tale

Whispers, can you hear?

On the winds of a hurricane you will sail

new windows polished clear

Reviews

[Vol]

Soren,
I am of the belief that many of the people we pass on the road would never pause to write a poem, but for many of them that's okay, because they are a living one. I've known a farmer who was a poem, and a beautician, too, and if lyrics are what you need, at least four lovers (one epic, two sonnets and a ballad) Oh, never mind, I've known a million of them too big to write about...
Vol

[Soren]

Thanks Vol you are so write I have written poems about some that I have known in the past one by the name of Red Green as colorful as his name.

[nadia dmitri]

I am not sure if this is what you were going for but this reminds me of the times I notice writing inspiration in everyday life, something like a spiderweb or a pile of leaves, its can be beautiful and overwhelming, great work as always!!:)

[Soren]

Thank you so much Nadia you got the point well. Anything can be a poem if looked at in the right way.

[John the Baptist]

This one reminded me of the spiritual teachings of Eckhart Tolle. All around us life reveals itself, but we are drawn to superficial things and dismiss the rest. Many good poems remain unwritten because of this.

[Soren]

I feel honored to have such a reference made. A great phlosopher. Your comment of being drawn to superficial thing and dismissing the rest is indeed at the core of unwritten poems

[Writergurl]

WOW, this is one powerful write here, love this

[Soren]

Thank you so much for the read and gracious comment. I appreciate your kind words

[Writergurl]

not a problem

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful symbolism and metaphor.

[Soren]

Thanks so much Thomas it means a lot

[Marie]

Everything and everyone in life has its/their own story to tell. The wind whispers secrets told to it by people who thought they were talking to themselves and it whispers those secrets as it blows. Sublime metaphoric write, Soren! A winner for me because it contains everything which is required in a wonderful poem, visual detail is superb, etc. I love the line "amber field of hay!" SO descriptive to compare a field of hay to the resin amber! Amazing write which I so enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing, dear poet...

[Soren]

Thank you so much for the read Marie very observant of you. Your words are always appreciated

[Marie]

Most welcome always, Soren...

[Jeyanthi]

Nice thought...
Is it tear or tear of hair from the head...
What a twisted words... caught in web or flown away .. or setting sail... but you caught rightly in your paintbrush and drawn a poem here..
(Gonna clean my windows well the tiles too)

[Soren]

Thank you Jeyanthi tear or tear ambiguous let the reader decide. Hair the prompt is mentioned only once so the poem is nearly bald but you can miss something by a hair so I guess you can do something by a hair as well. Thanks so much for the read and help

[Jeyanthi]

Yeah... accurate!