Trick or treat

Trick or treat

A Poem by Soren

I take from my sack a memory of the past
a friend that had never seen Halloween
wanting to give him an experience that would last
taking our children, he stood between

Short and in a costume he fit right in
although senior citizen, he appeared a child
he held out his bag to those within
his goodies higher and higher piled

Holding out his sack, hair on his hands back
All the children were now asked to take off their masks
He lifted his hood, paint or face covering he did lack
looking at him, take off your mask the candy giver asks

© 2024 Soren


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A flawlessly penned eerie write to celebrate Hallowe'en. I give candy to every person who knocks, man, woman, child or older. It is so nice to honour the old traditions. Sad that the candy giver asked your friend who had never experienced Hallowe'en to take off his mask! It was unnecessary! I hope he enjoyed being part of the event and that happy memories were made to recall at another time, another place. Lovely work, Soren. Thank you for sharing...

Posted 1 Month Ago


Soren

1 Month Ago

Thanks Marie for your reads and comments they are deeply appreciated.
Marie

1 Month Ago

Most welcome always, Soren...
dear Soren.. as we age we do seem to wear a Mask 🎭 funny or sad… Trick or Treat…. softly, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


Soren

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much Pat for the read and comment yes it is true we all wear many masks some good, some ba.. read more
It's good, I liked that they still wanted him to take off the mask without him wearing one. Makes me think of the twilight zone movie where the seniors were able to be kids again.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Soren

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much for the read and understanding comment it is deeply appreciated

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Added on October 23, 2024
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