Masters of the universe?

Masters of the universe?

A Poem by Soren

Greater than nature we pretend to be
No idea if we create, monsters or god
In front of a mirror we revel in our own vanity
Arrogance's bait becomes a fool's facade

Broken puzzle parts we piece together
making a gown to cover ignorance's nakedness
A blind tailor sewing a suit of frog hair and leather
in dreams from which nothing will awaken us

Three breasted chickens, chocolate udders on a cow
dig holes in earth's skin, paint the sky brown
breed boneless fish, a cholesterol free sow
mercurial paint makes a smile out of a frown

Searching for a black hole with dime store glasses
a diaper holding our used up mistakes
changed daily we sit with red asses
knowing faith or knowledge both are fakes

© 2024 Soren


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The vanity of human beings leads them to be opinionated and filled with their own importance. We pretend to be greater than nature, but that is a very foolish notion indeed.
I love the second verse and how leader's ignorance is so poetically expressed, Soren.
Modifying food and nature is quite a risk, but in our world today nothing is naturally fresh. Even fruit which should be eaten fresh has preservatives within it, as has bread, milk, and you name it, most likely it also has preservatives in it.
The blindness of humanity in Stanza 3 really hits home, Soren.
A superbly penned metaphoric gem! A very gripping write which won't allow the reader to leave the poem until it has been thoroughly read. Great write, dear friend. Thank you for sharing...

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Marie

1 Month Ago

Most welcome always, dear Soren. Please forgive my absence. I have been very unwell with a virus whi.. read more
Soren

1 Month Ago

Hope you are feeling better
Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your very kind message, dear Soren. Another day or two and I should be back to myself .. read more

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