Country walk

Tobacco green wave on hills

golden wash of sun flowing

from morning's fountain spills

over undulating seas growing

Helios inscribes his time consuming arc

cloud numbers move across sky's clock

painting hands, shadows long and dark

dirt road behind, now a wake on my walk

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

A true atmosphere of nature. Except we don't have tobacco around here in the Highlands of Scotlan. Unless you are talking of the colour. Then we do have it in abundance. Wonderful reflective stuff.

[Soren]

Thank you Ken I do appreciatethe review and kind words. Tobacco has been a crop here for some time and is remniscent of older days

[Amy R]

This poem captures the beauty of the landscape and the reflective moments that come with observing nature. Beautiful imagery nicely penned.
The use of “Helios” invokes classical mythology, suggesting a timeless quality to the sun and its movement.
The "dirt road" serves as a metaphor for life's journey, implying the experiences and memories left behind.

This poem reminds us all that we should slow down and appreciate nature and the time we have left.

Thanks for sharing.
-Amy

[Soren]

Thank you so much Amy for the review and most understanding interpretation. Your kind comments mean a great deal and I thank you for your most supportive words

[Amy R]

You're very welcome,. Have a great Sunday

[Marie]

A delightful walk in the countryside is superbly penned in this charming poem. The visual detail is alluring and draws me in more and more as I read. I love how the poet tells his reader that his walk with Mother Nature has woken him up! The description of the sky's clock is beyond words, sooooo beautiful and I adore the comparison of the sky's clock with Helios arc. An enchanting write, the magic of a beautiful walk captured perfectly. Wondrous poem, Soren! I so enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing, dear friend...

[Soren]

Thank you so much Marie for your review and most kind words. Your visits are most anticipated and welcome

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear friend. Wishing you a very blessed and beautiful Sunday to enjoy...

[Arundass TP]

I love to walk in country roads. I feel very energetic too. Good work

[Soren]

Thank you Arundass for your read and comment they are appreciated