Bricks of hope

Brick by brick science’s logic is laid

In the mind of the poet all is made of hope

Religion, air castles for what is prayed

All come to the same end of the rope

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I wish that rope would extend further in all our minds....and hope could finds its way

around the world...we need those air castles in which to reside.
j.

[Soren]

Thank you Jacob for the read and comment.It means a great deal.

[Kelly Scheppers]

The brevity speaks to me, with clarity and absolution. It's perfect!

[Soren]

Thank you so much for taking your time to read this piece. your comment is highly valued.

[Kelly Scheppers]

My pleasure!

[Marie]

Hope lives eternal in the mind of a poet, that is so very true, Soren. With regard to religion, the only person who is wrong is the person telling everybody else their religion is wrong if they are not of the same religion as that person is. In life, we each travel very different roads up the mountain with regard to religion, but each of us will arrive at the top of that mountain regardless of what our beliefs are or what our religion is. Science lays brick's of logic to build a conclusion, but the conclusion is not infallible. There is no right or wrong in life because each human being is an individual and what may be right for one person, may not be right for another person. We live in hope, but at the end of the day what will be, WILL be. A very thought provoking, insightful succinct allegorical gem. I so enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing, Soren...

[Soren]

Thank you so much Marie, again you cover all the points and I have to say I share your views. Your comments are most appreciated.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Soren. Thank you again for sharing...