Chaotic order

Control an illusion
Power dissolves in smoke
Unity from division
Pieces a single picture
Choice governed
Music from individual notes
Dancing harmony
Chaos in pattern
A straight line in circles

Reviews

[MrBlack202]

I love poem and how thought provoking it is. I like how cleverly you've put two contrasting ideas and in such a beautiful way.

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your review and your most kind words they are deeply appreciated

[nadia dmitri]

"Chaos in pattern
A straight line in circles"

So clever and thought-provoking. Very interesting word choice as always. Great work :)

[Soren]

Thank you, Nadia. You’re reviews are most motivating, and I am gratified for the support.

[Marie]

Control is definitely an illusion and very quickly power can melt away. Within division there can be unity and pieces, like a jigsaw, form a picture. Choice governs our lives and music is created from individual notes. Dancing is always in harmony, chaos forms a pattern and a straight line is bent to make a circle. Wow! What thought went into this poetic creation, Soren! I so agree that there is order in chaos! A very impressive opulent gem! Thank you for sharing, dear friend...

[Soren]

Thank you very much Marie for the review and most kind comments. Once again I find that you are on the same track of thought that I was when I wrote this you’re comments are so appreciated.