Music of the heart

Music of the heart

A Poem by Soren

Music of relationships a symphony 
some discordant others in harmony
written or improvised, in poly-rhythm or synchrony
flat or sharp, minor or major key

Strings, brass woodwinds or drums
seduced our will succumbs
each sweet note like falling crumbs
devoured by gnawing hunger that rapture becomes

© 2024 Soren


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Relationships and the various courses they can take is very finely captured in this eloquently penned poem. It is wondrous how the poet has identified the different paths which relationships take with the different kinds of music and keys. Simply genius!!! I love how the poet identifies that musical instruments seduce our desire and we inhale the music deeply like a little dog waiting at the table for the crumbs which fall. That desire grows until we become as hungry as the little dog and then experience the ecstasy after the agony! Wow! An outstanding write, brief and to the point, a joy to read. Thank you for sharing, dear Soren...

Posted 3 Months Ago


Soren

3 Months Ago

Marie you are too kind. I very much enjoy your visits to this site they are so supportive and kind. .. read more
Marie

3 Months Ago

Most welcome always, Soren...

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