One in all, all in one

You are sweet I am savor

Each of us a different flavor

Once mixed can you separate sugar from salt?

Both a different taste, no one's at fault

Where does darkness end and light begin?

Me without and you within

Roots become trunk, trunk turns to limbs

All now one as light dims 

Reviews

[Marie]

Dear Poet, just a message to let you know that I tried to find some of your poems to read and though you told me you had a lot of poems on the site, it would seem they no longer exist because all that is showing is Page 1. Nothing I do will bring up Page 2 or any other page. I am sorry I cannot return the compliment to you in reading your beautiful poetry and commenting. As I said, there is nothing coming up after Page 1. It may be a technical hitch on the site, I don't know, but please accept my deepest apologies for being unable to read and comment today on your poetry as I have all of Page 1 done. Sincerely, Marie

[Soren]

Thank you Marie I checked and on mine below the last poem on page one is a series of small boxes in blue labeled with numbers if you check on these more and more come up I got to 14 different pages and the poems are still there. If this is not so on your page then there is a glitch on your page in the program. Thanks so much for asking and I hope this gets worked out I would be most honored if you would review some of the old ones.

[Marie]

Good morning, Soren and thank you for your kind response. The box with the numbers is missing, so it is a glitch on the system,. I will check this evening again when I come to the computer as I am only on my phone at the moment and if I am still unable to see the box with the little numbers, I will contact the site and let it know, but hoping that your pages will be restored by then as I look forward to reading your work each day. Wishing you a very lovely day and a very blessed, joyful and wonderful weekend too - Marie

[Abhilash Hegde]

Interesting, I liked the theme here and the title. Very well written and the word rhymes come off naturally and blend in. Different people, taste, personalities. It's like oil and water, hard to mix. The first stanza and the second one to tie it together, One in all, all in one. Enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing!

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your most kind review and comment it is cherished.

[Abhilash Hegde]

you're most welcome, Soren.

[John the Baptist]

Basically, this one is about the oneness of all things and the way that oneness presents itself. Really liked the brevity and rhyming.

[Soren]

Thank you so much John for the read and comment. Your visits are always so welcome

[Soren]

Thank you so much John for the read and comment. Your visits are always so welcome

[Thomas W Case]

Wow, Powerful work. So powerful.

[Soren]

Thank you so much Thomas for the read and review. Your words are deeply valued.

[Marie]

This poem captures superbly the fact that like two snowflakes each person is unique and different, most of the time opposite to another, but that is what attracts us to our soulmate, the fact that one of us complements the other. One is sugar, one is salt. One is a knife, the other a fork (metaphorically speaking) and one is a picture, the other a frame. I love this poem, Soren. It is a succinct but very sublime write. I love the rhyming scheme and the visual detail. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing, Soren...

[Soren]

A most perfect interpretation of the intent of this piece. I thank you deeply for your most perceptive read and kind words of encouragement. They are most deeply valued.

[Einstein Noodle]

whoa! dark and tragic ... lots of avenues to wander down between the line, Soren .. thanks for sharing
E.

[Soren]

Thank you Einstein for the read and kind comment it is always a pleasure to hear from you. I keep checking to see your posts.

[Einstein Noodle]

i've been tapped out for a year or more with only a trickle here and there ... that's ok too eh!? we change and keep rollin' ;)

[Soren]

yea that's fine I work with scraps that I pull from garbage heaps

[Einstein Noodle]

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