Life is what you make it

Life without purpose

Fire without fuel

Broken without service

Hand without tool

Gun without shells

Hammer with no nail

Heroin no cartels

Justice without scale

Perfect now defective

Healthy now ill

Incompetent effective

Victory force of will

Reviews

[Marie]

Life is like a double edged sword, Soren and how effectively you have captured that in this wondrous write. Life's antithesis is finely depicted through excellent word choice. I think the final line in the poem brings it all together for me, it shouts out loud and clear exactly what conquest is:
"Victory force of will". It is the red ribbon which ties the bouquet of your words together for me! Superb write! Thank you for sharing, Soren...

[Soren]

Thank you so much Marie for the most generous review and kind words of encouragement. They are deeply esteemed.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, Soren. I wish you a very blessed and joyful day to enjoy...

[Thomas W Case]

powerful work you nailed it.

[Soren]

Thank you so much Thomas

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Life presents the weapon and we decide how and when to use it...it can be used to prevent violence or cause it...
j.

[Soren]

Thanks Jacob for the interpretation it is most appreciated. Everything has two sides it is true it is us that decides what to make of it.