Comercial music

New better than old

says generation Z

Pressboard mind controlled

Auto tune greater than reality

A battered guitar superior to new

A porcupine has character balloons not

Cracks in oil paintings increase value

Gravel in a voice makes it hot

Technological sugar

Mass produced plastic garbage

Here sound as a booger

makes musical carnage

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Noise into music and back to noise. Actually what is music? A well written poem connecting past and present.

[Tumi]

your poem depicts the influence of technology
in a way i find it SARCASTIC
though the techs brought good
but majority was chaos

[Soren]

Thank you for your read and interpretation it is most appreciated and valued