The wash

Inevitable becomes impossible

when life begins and ends

dry clean guilt reverts washable

clean glass of conscience bends

After days fight

with the suds of lasting night

mud now white

all blood washed bright

Reviews

[Marie]

An amazing allegorical write with very vivid depiction which imparts to the reader that everything comes clean in the wash of life and though that may sound impossible, it is an inevitable ending to underhand dealings which should never take place. The poem could refer to many different things, but I'm trying to read between the lines, trying to read what is not written instead of what is written. It really is a very thought provoking poem, excellently inked, a succinct little gem which I need to ponder on more. Thank you for sharing, dear poet and the little box with the page numbers is back this evening and I am happy once more...

[Soren]

Thank you Marie for finding this one that spawned from what I saw as nature's form of forgiveness in the passage of time. I so appreciate your interpretations of these humble pieces.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear poet... Wishing you a very blessed and joyful day and a wonderful weekend too. Enjoy!

[nadia dmitri]

Oooo such a cool idea, very inspiring take on a normal idea turned into thought provoking poetry. Really gret work :))

[Soren]

Thanks so much Nadia for the review and such generous words. They are most valued