Become what is not

Become what is not

A Poem by Soren

Emptiness births meaning

to the invisible believed

Anger shapes hope

On a ledge

at the edge

Dive deep,

murky pool of dreams

conjure peace from despair

distill charity, liquor of bliss

Breath life into the inanimate

© 2024 Soren


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I believe this is a dream where you become what is not, perhaps you are in a void, you disintegrate into nothing which may be death, joining those who have done this before...if you are not breathing, then you are at the bottom of the sea...where hope lies for the dying or dead; or you have become lifeless, an inanimate object, an abyss encompasses you.... "breathe life into the inanimate".....If you become what is not....you are lifeless, just air.....or ashes
Warmly, B

Posted 4 Months Ago


Soren

4 Months Ago

Thank you Betty for the review and interpretation it is most appreciated.
Betty Hermelee

4 Months Ago

You’re very welcome!
Warmly
B.🌷

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