Cold rain

Comes a winter storm

dark skies a cold wind

Night coming on

sleep in dreams sinned

Cold rain outside my door it falls inside my heart

It's frigid outside and in

The damp chills me to the marrow

warmth of fire so long it's been

Reviews

[Marie]

A very poignant write which captures the lack of the warmth of love in life. The fire long gone out, the embers turned to ashes, the cold outside felt deep within the body. So many of us have had this experience in life. That warmth will always be missed and that all invasive cold and rain will always be felt in its place. Great write, Soren! Thank you for sharing...

[Soren]

Marie you look through the dark and see the last glowing ember in the fire. I love your interpretation here. Thank you so much for the read and most understanding interpretation.

[Marie]

Thank you, dear Soren. You are always most welcome, dear friend...

[Tumi]

your poem makes me think of the cruel rain that flooded my home
some weeks ago
although i loved the rain
but can't shudder at the fact it causes havoc
your words were finely expressed in few lines
i enjoyed reading

[Soren]

Thank you so much for the read and the most kind words they are appreciated

[Tumi]

you are welcome