Melted dreams

Melted dreams

A Poem by Soren

A bit of moss where the bricks cross

gossamer grass blanket worn and frayed

Dew drops spread, honey sunrise overhead

moving clouds a haze in a mist sprayed


Naked wood in dissolving shadow stood

breaking the surface of a new day

A cabin's worn walls memory's echo calls

melted night's dreams flow away

© 2024 Soren


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Your poem paints a tranquil scene where nature and memory intertwine. The imagery of moss clinging to bricks, gossamer grass worn and frayed, and dew drops under a honey sunrise creates a vivid picture of a quiet morning awakening. The mention of moving clouds and a misty haze adds to the ethereal quality of the setting, evoking a sense of peace and introspection.

The depiction of naked wood breaking through dissolving shadows speaks to the emergence of a new day, symbolizing renewal and the passing of time. The cabin's worn walls reverberating with echoes of memories fading into the morning light beautifully captures the transient nature of dreams and experiences.

Your poem flows with a gentle rhythm and evocative language, inviting readers to immerse themselves in the serenity of the natural world and the subtle shifts of dawn. Thank you for sharing this peaceful and reflective piece.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Soren

5 Months Ago

I thank you deeply for the in depth interpretation of this piece that goes to its very core. The rev.. read more
Mystical Ink

5 Months Ago

You're most welcome! Looking forward to reading more of your wonderful writing.

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