Dark bliss of ignorance

Dark bliss of ignorance

A Poem by Soren

Darkness old friend

my family my home

so familiar when I roam

guiding light to the end


Can't bear to see the sun

blemishes reveal

dark ugliness conceal

cobwebs of illusions spun


Shadows where life can be

false hopes sweet dreams smiles

child like candy hope that beguiles

delusions of beauty


Video games movie TV

justice peace happily ever after

joy relief laughter

shadowy matrix fairytale tranquility

© 2024 Soren


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"If you ever get lost in the dark and you can't see, I'll be a light to guide you. We find out what we're made of when we are called to help our friends in need. You can count on me like one, two, three, I'll be there...'cause that's what friends are supposed to do, oh yeah." Bruno Mars... I just learned this song (Count on Me) on guitar and played it for my daughters. It contains a beautiful message. Everything is a song to me or inspires a song as a reply. My life has a soundtrack. I enjoyed your poem. Hopefully you'll understand my empathetic reply. Bless, F.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Soren

10 Months Ago

A hearty thanks for the thought. I too am inspired by music and the old song "Like a bridge over tro.. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

10 Months Ago

We are all tiny candles looking around in the dark for a Lighthouse; the wax of time melting with ou.. read more
Darkness may feel and look as light sometimes. It's a think of the eye and mind. Nicely written.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Soren

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the read and interesting thought on this matter. Yes this can be experienced w.. read more
Loved this poem for its refreshingly honest appraisal of our oft affinity for darkness. Darkness can indeed be such a home, such a friend and guide. Something that we don't like to admit to ourselves. Very relatable for me, Soren. I dislike being dragged into the sunlight, have my harsh truths exposed and confronted. Let me be lulled into my illusions till I slip away into my eternal rest. All the lines in this poem are my favorites! The new rhyming scheme works wonders!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Soren

10 Months Ago

You are too kind my friend I feel humbled by your remarks. They are always most appreciated.
A cascade of memories. Excellent work.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Soren

10 Months Ago

Thanks Thomas for the read and comment
I see this as flickers of poetic style and beauty strobing onto the readers mind. Excellent writing.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Soren

10 Months Ago

Thank you Ken for the read and comment yes flickers indeed. Sometimes we choose darkness rather than.. read more

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