Phases

Blind fears bought contempt

paid in golden years, passion's price

No love paraded, exempt

when sex traded as a vice

Broken brick's creations, laid one by one

Shadows predicts isolation's dark wall

Sky shaded from the sun

Cloud's faded roof begins to fall

Heaven in ruins discarded

buried under rubble

Gilded illusions red carded

doubles trouble

A battered wreck

washed up on destitutions shore

a fly speck

an unveiled w***e

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

red carded double troubled

No one wants to end up a battered wreck on destitution’s shore.

What an ending. You convey emotion well here Soren. Very well indeed.

Chris

[Soren]

Thank you so much Chris your gracious remarks are deeply valued.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

my love life is buried under rubble...
but I still smile.
j.

[Soren]

Funny how the mind goes to that and that was just what I was thinking as I wrote this. Thanks for the review Jacob it is appreciated.