What do you see?

What do you see?

A Poem by Soren

Do you notice all?
Do you see the unseen?
Is your vision small?
Blinded by a screen?

Can you smell those soon dead?
Can you taste argyle?
hear what isn't said?
see love in a smile?

After birth distorted,
stab wound or sting of bee,
vision contorted,
we see what we hope to see

© 2024 Soren


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The truth is not always noticed or if it is, is misunderstood. Ignoring the truth because it hurts - stings, is a common practise: so many people turn away because it's easier to do than feel specks of ash touch their minds plus - the fall-out is never allowed to get near enough anyway. Could be this poem is about a general lack of empathy loudly hidden by over-ridden self-focus! Perhaps?

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for the read and the comment I love to see the different interpretations that peop.. read more
Brilliant work. I really like this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much Thomas your review is deeply appreciated

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Added on March 6, 2024
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