Don't be afraid

Don't be afraid

A Poem by Soren

Don't fear the dark
painting end of day
from the womb a birthmark
night kneeling to pray

Its unrolling blanket warms
soft cradle of the soul
safe from outside storms
a tranquil shoal

Floating under celestial seas so black
thick darkness be my shoulder
tote me in your sack
light ashes that smoulder

Let darkness carry you away
enfold you to its breast
here family shadows lay
in their peace rest

Broken, torn, bent
as under scorching suns you roam
day of life spent
dark will guide you home 

© 2024 Soren


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“ don’t fear the dark”…. it will enfold you into a place of calm of warmth…..born from a dark place , a beautiful caring place… the womb, so soft and settling….then pondering under a black sky, so peaceful and meditative…..never fear the dark, because someone will always lead you home …..lovely
Warmly, B

Posted 8 Months Ago


Soren

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the read and careful analysis. Yes never fear the dark in any form. It is a co.. read more
Betty Hermelee

8 Months Ago

You’re very welcome Soren
Warmly, B
We fear the dark, I believe, because it gives us a feeling of not being in control. Death does the same thing.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Soren

8 Months Ago

Thank you John for the review and understanding analysis. It is deeply appreciated.
would that I had been taught to embrace the night in an unfearful way - might have made my youth a lot easier. I didn't learn to be out in the night until late in life. - carl

Posted 8 Months Ago


Soren

8 Months Ago

Thank you Carl my father was a strong disbeliever in the supernatural and taught us that the only th.. read more
Powerfully beautiful imagery.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Soren

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much Thomas for the review and most kind words.
This is fabulously beautiful. I love the way you embrace the tranquility of the night.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Soren

8 Months Ago

Thank you Fabian for you kind and generous response. It is deeply appreciated.
I find this very elegant and smooth in its style and subject.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Soren

8 Months Ago

Thank you Ken you are too kind. Yes I have always found the dark soothing and peaceful
The dark can be both frightening and/or freeing.. depends on how the mind sees it and the heart feels it.
Your words inspire because one looks at both sides of the coin in quick succession and can make comparisons.. if wanting to. Thoughts here to consider.. carefully.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Soren

8 Months Ago

Thank you Emmajoy for the read and insightful comments they are most appreciated.

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