Make me one to go

A mist of zest from a lemon pressed

now squeezed all juice released

a peel that has lost its zeal

what's least now fleeced

Reviews

[Anita Frader]

Having the life squeezed out of you can certainly cause one to feel sour.
I liked your poem. 🙂
Cheers!

[Soren]

So true. Thanks for the read and comment

[Betty Hermelee]

if you press too hard, you may get a rebound, just like a lemon, if you squeeze everything out of it, it turns to a sad looking peel... trying to create a metaphor... you can only go far and if the is little response on the other side, then stop.....there is nothing more to do....
Warmly, B

[Soren]

Very good Betty if the life is sneezed out of you and you are peeled and grated there will not be much left at the end of the day. Or then again I love Margaritas. Thanks for the read

[Betty Hermelee]

Me too! And you're very welcome!
Warmly, B