Hanging by fingernails

Hanging by fingernails

A Poem by Soren

I've lived my life, hanging onto the edge

walking the ledge

tight roping on a razor in reverse

betting against the odds

taking on the gods

playing the lottery of the universe

Always took the long shot

never got caught

although many said stop

even when I lost

never paid the cost

I always came out on top

I've ridden a bucking bull

swam in a whirlpool

walked in a lion's den

accused in a court

dodged bullets for sport

lived life to its fullest amongst men

© 2023 Soren


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Quite a resume here. The speaker has apparently lived a life of adventure and on the edge. It might be a good idea to delete that dodging bullets for sport bit, though. Make a mistake there and there's no replay.

Posted 1 Year Ago


My life has been off the rails for most of it, I can relate to this writing very much. Nice job

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for the read and ability to relate
I think you have had Lady Luck on your side Soren, probably when you needed her most. Having said that the poem tells me you have a positive attitude regardless. Life is tough. I have walked many a tightrope:) Wonderful read on a sunny Sunday here. All the best.

Chris



Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thanks Chris for the review and most positive words of encouragement. I think one should live life t.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Absolutely. I don’t know anyone who gets a second shot at it 🙂

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