Luck

A've been ta da gallows many a times

'ad da rope about ma neck

'ad it tightened for ma crimes

but da drop d'ey did check

Other times da rope broke

or da trap wouldn't open

Close enough for me ta choke

an even ta stop a hope'n

But it seems dat I always got's another chance

There's dose dat say ah's gots a lot a pluck

When da judge says ah's got's ta dance

Ah depends upon ma luck

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

So different from you Soren. I wonder what inspired this piece? He sure had some luck on his side. Trouble with luck is that it doesn’t usually last. Enjoyed the visit my friend.

Chris

[Soren]

Just thought I would jump out of the rut and try something different. Thanks for the review Chris it is most appreciated.

[nadia dmitri]

Such an interesting use of language and rhyme, great job :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Soren... you have a language that has the sound of Forests singing Claire de lune. The feathered Birds sing along when Whippoorwills hum. softly, Pat

[Soren]

You humble me with you words. I appreciate your encouragement. Thank you.