Moonbeam

The blackest shadows of your darkest nightmare

become the soft glow of a dream

when you close your eyes and the sun you've lost

is traded for a moonbeam

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

nice! love the turn from dark and somber to our bella luna .. shining so bright in the mind's eye .. short and sweet says i! well done!
E.

[Soren]

Thanks Einstein for the review and comments they are most appreciated.

[DIVYA]

Dear Soren,
The darkest nightmare can lead to a glowing dream. The harsh sun lost may be replaced by a cooling beam. Every cloud has a silver lining. The human spirit has such resilience. There is always something to fall back upon. You wrote this beautifully. I loved the metaphors used. The message shared.

[Soren]

Thank you so much Divya your words mean a great deal. When one believes that everything has a purpose and happens for the best one can find the pony in a stable of manure.

[John the Baptist]

I think I see metaphors for states of consciousness in this one. The sun is the conscious mind, with all of the trouble it sees. The moon stands for the subconscious, where nightmares can occur, but which is also the doorway to peace.

[Soren]

A very interesting view John thank you so much for the read.

[willweb]

Nice one my friend. Short but very expressive.

[Soren]

Thanks Will appreciate the read