Killing a Ladybug

Killing a Ladybug

A Poem by Soren

Ask yourself honestly

have you ever thought of these things?

You may say you do not believe

but absolved by completion, what relief it brings


Do you step around a ladder?

Do you feel uneasy if a mirror you break?

Hesitate when going to step on a crack?

Make a wish when blowing out the candles on a cake?


Do you say bless you when someone sneezes?

Have you carried a rabbit's foot?

Avoid the number 666?

Ask not on the 13th floor to be put?


Do you have a lucky pair of pants or shirt?

Have you ever your fingers crossed?

Hang a horse shoe only pointing up?

Tied three knots when something you've lost?


Made a wish on a falling star?

Shook hands with your right when your left's as good

As a host made a toast?

Knocked on wood?


Most have done some of these things

Superstition gives a sense of control

reduced tension it brings

Even when science we extol

© 2023 Soren


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I do the below things still Soren.
"Made a wish on a falling star?
Shook hands with your right when your left's as good
As a host made a toast?
Knocked on wood?"
I do butterfly wishes too and thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much my friend I so look forward to your comments.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I enjoy your work Soren and you are welcome.
Ah superstition. I delighted in reading your examples and smiled Soren. Could never kill a ladybug. Oh no, shoo her away, her house is on fire, her children have gone. I have to admit ladders and mirrors get me too. I very much enjoyed this descriptive and fun write. A fine composition for your readers. Have a great weekend.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much Chris for the read and comments. So appreciate your stopping by.
Generally speaking I'm not really superstitious, but now that you chose these to show us, I definitely have indulged in many of them..... I enjoyed reading it very much...
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for the review Betty it is most appreciated.
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

you're very welcome
Warmly, B
I believe I have done all of those things but one, the three knots I was not familiar with but the rest. I said something to my daughter the other day for putting her shoes on the table and when someone opens an umbrella inside, I am the first to say something. I refuse to pick up a penny if it isn't heads up and I could go on and on...funny, and we really don't find it strange to do these things, there is a comfort to them. Your poem was fun today.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thanks Will glad you had fun with it. It is best to have fun with superstitions rather than worry ab.. read more

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