Lost on a mobius strip

Lost on a mobius strip

A Poem by Soren

Realities half twist, a one sided trip

On the cusp, concealed footprints of purpose erase

a fading memory on a mobius strip

a departed dimension in time and space


Circles in a whirlpool of similarity

no clockwise or counter clockwise

Mirrored, cloned waves on a boundless sea

horizon to horizon, watery desert, dunes arise


No signs, no roads, no marker

always returning to where one began

Unable to see that it couldn't get darker

marooned on an endless journey, no plan


Not knowing from where one came;

should one resist or go with the flow?

Truth a ghostly, unfathomable game

Even who one is, one doesn't know


A single dimension, the rest an illusion

no smell, balance, touch, taste, deaf and blind

Thoughts nothing more than a reoccurring delusion

intuition evaporated into the turmoil of one's mind

© 2023 Soren


Author's Note

Soren
A mobius strip is a surface that can be formed by attaching the ends of a strip of paper together with a half-twist. It then becomes a single-sided surface with no boundaries, The Möbius strip is a non-orientable surface, meaning that within it one cannot consistently distinguish clockwise from counter clockwise turns.

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Those ghosts, do haunt us Soren.
"Not knowing from where one came;
should one resist or go with the flow?
Truth a ghostly, unfathomable game
Even who one is, one doesn't know"
I loved the above lines. I could write a epic poem from. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much John. I so appreciate your reviews and comments.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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