Daybreak

Although the road does twist and turn

in the cold wind tossed or mire lost

you need have no concern

There's only one thing you must learn

when you give up all hope and in despair grope

when for home you yearn

My guiding force will always burn

spreading light, breaking the darkest night,

Like the sunrise I will always return

Reviews

[Neville]

.. write on my friend and yes, may there always be another day .. Neville

[Soren]

Thanks so much Neville for the review and yes there will always be another day,

[JessyJacob]

Hi Soren, its a great sacrifice you have made, by taking over him, i dont want you to get away in the ocean as you just started your sail on the ship, but God is with you, for he is always cared you, and have well wishing heart for you, as you have remained one of this best heart touching too, i dont want to say what every one said, but it is the fact, but there was also mistake from you, i can feel it, you are not alone, and you are the bright and caring responsible heart. Go ahead for a new sun rise. This is hurting so much to say this, but i dont know what to say......

[Soren]

Thank you for your review and kind words and wishes.

[Sami Khalil]

With each new dawn cones new hope; we must grab hold of it, make use of it, spread it around. This poem is well expressed

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your most kind words and encouragement.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Soren

[Chris Shaw]

And sunrise brings a new day. The darkness has temporarily gone. A new day brings new hope. A far cry from the cloying night. Thank you Soren.

Chris

[Soren]

Thank you for the red Chris and for the understanding comments they mean a great deal.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

each sunrise brings with it new light, new hope. There will always be light succeeding dark.
In nature, in ourselves, maybe in spite of ourselves.
j.

[Soren]

Thanks so much Jacob for the encouraging words and review it is most appreciated