Technology/Mental Health

Technology Mental health

The age of stone Blame and revenge alone

The age of copper Possessed exorcism will stop her

The age of bronze Locked away as we carry on

The age of iron Lobotomies ECT pills now our enviorn

The age of steel No advancement still

The nuclear age Pills still the rage

Computers and AI Nothing new to try

CRISPR Still chemicals, prevention not a whisper

Man and his invention Still no focus on prevention

Why do we always wait to treat

what with prevention we could defeat

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Prime example. Heroin, a example. We treat wounds with more deadly things. I did enjoy the poetry and your thoughts. Powerful and worthwhile words shared.
Coyote

[Soren]

Thank you my friend for your review and most kind words. Yes we have problems as a society prioritizing things.

[Coyote Poetry]

We do Soren and you are welcome.

[emmajoygreen]

What a uniquely creative and near academic way of making a point! How right you are too, it's a case of shutting the stable door after the horse has bolted, isn't it! Over time there have been time to think ahead of the ' who knows what will happen' then .. a turn away to scratch one's head before washing togas or animal skin.

Perhaps more of this: going off in 'Age' tangents perhaps. Fascinating! .

[Soren]

Thank you so much Emmajoy for your most gracious comments and review of this experiment of mine. It is deeply appreciated.

[emmajoygreen]

Your writing was appreciated too, I promise. It truly is a unique presentation as is its content.

[Betty Hermelee]

this is an excellent spoof on prevention, not necessarily treatment, but do something wise to prevent an illness or a computer failure or flood, or a million things that we experience that are not inescapable...
I love the idea of the different ages and what has transpired at that time..... you make a good point and the structure is clever...
Best, B

[Soren]

Thank you Betty for your most kind words and review they are most appreciated.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome Soren
Best, B