Uncertainty

Uncertainty immersed in fear, initially does appear as a small sprout

It germinates a tear. Like a spear that pierces, hemorrhaging doubt

Trepidation rends my breast

A sentinel so near, not a seer, unsure how things will turn out

Not clear where destiny will steer, I quake and shake and shout

Panic builds its nest

Wishing it to disappear, yet still it does adhere, ignorant of what it's about

From its path so shear, I attempt to veer, hoping paranoia to rout

Still on a quest

Afraid to hear, or peer in a mirror, it hovers and does tout

How dear is our last year, when one will be worn out

Now I can rest

Reviews

[Ladysue]

This is profound write on many levels and on many things. Like the rhyming too. Great title and subject.

[Soren]

Thank you so much Ladysue for your review and deeply appreciated comment.

[willweb]

I really enjoyed the form and rhyming scheme of this my friend. It starts out with concerns but ends on an upbeat note. Nicely done.

[Soren]

I thought I would experiment and try something new. Thanks Will for such gracious remarks.

[Ken Simm.]

This says so much and in so many beautifully rendered lines. An impeccable write of many things including relationships and something that is like paranoia but not. A panic attack.

[Soren]

Thank you Ken for your review and most gracious comments.

[Lisasview]

Trust is the main thing when one is in a relationship.
Interesting use of rhymes dear Soren.
Lisa

[Soren]

Thanks Lisa for reviewing this piece and your comment. Yea I thought I would experiment with the rhyme.

[Lisasview]

Quite fun and clever...
You are most welcome.
Lisa

[Chris Shaw]

Uncertainty in relationships can certainly cause damage. Only trust will alleviate that niggle. Trust sets aside fear Soren.

Chris

[Soren]

Thank you Chris for the review and wise words. Your comments are always most welcome.

[John the Baptist]

As it says, perfect love casts out fear.

[Soren]

So it does, if one can find perfect love. Thanks so much for the review and comment John.