End of time

Dolos andApate did lie

Aphrodite and Jesus did cry

Even the gods die

Whether on a cross or tree

At Ragnarok or Calvary

To guaranty immortality

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Christ was crucified as a human. He felt the pain and the agony of betrayal as a human being. And when someone undergoes that kind of suffering and offers such a selfless sacrifice, then immortality is a given.

[Soren]

Thank you Divya for your insightful words. Your comments are always cherrished.

[AYVID N]

Another great poem and I was so happy to read it. You're most welcome, dear Soren.

[Chris Shaw]

Sacrifice. A meaningful piece of brevity here. They all paid a price to achieve immortality. My mind also wandered into other pastures and I thought of those who had fought and died for our freedom. They also paid a price. Intelligent writing Soren.

Chris

[Soren]

So right Chris. I too thought of many others, those that won horor, a Victoria Cross, Medal of honor but also those that died in ignominity but the poem became too long and unfocused. I appreciate your insightful read.

[Ken Simm.]

This is clever and I would like to be associated with its message.

[Soren]

Thank you so much Ken for your review and most kind remarks

[willweb]

In all that is forever there is also a sacrifice, nothing comes for free.
Nice one Soren

[Soren]

Thanks Will for the review. Yes there must be an expenditure of energy for there to be a reaction.