So consider

Let me be as pure as rain, where I touch giving life again

Like the fine soft grass, soothing the feet of all that pass

I want to grow as old as a river, like the sun be a generous giver

Be a verdant tree, who's shade gives respite to the hot and weary

As a bird let my song cheer the weak and strong lifting spirits of the dreary

So then consider, if all of this I did deliver

Nature has, no thanks were given, we try to replace her expecting to be forgiven

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

I like and agree with both the subject and the structure of this intelligent poem.

[Soren]

Thank you for taking your time to read and comment on this poem

[JD Major]

Yes, so much of human endeavor is in pursuit of meaning, and forgiveness

[Soren]

Thanks JD for the review and comment

[AYVID N]

Nature has so many qualities one could imbibe for peace, bliss and joy.
I like the softened hues in which you painted nature here. We feel its caring, nurturing hand.
Reading this poem, my thoughts turned to Nature and I think it's time we stopped taking so much from it and starting giving something back.
A very thoughtful poem, dear Soren.

[Soren]

Thank you DIVYA your reviews reflect your own sensitivity, no wonder that your poems are so wonderful. Yes it is past time to give back to nature if we are going to live in harmony with her.

[AYVID N]

I thank you too for such wonderfully kind words. You have a great day, my friend!

[Chris Shaw]

Nature has all the answers in my opinion. Sadly we neglect her and will do so at our peril. Beautiful imagery in this piece Soren.

Chris

[Soren]

Thank you Chris for your most valued review and comments. Yes we seem focused on our comfort in the here and now and don't pay attention to the future for ourselves or our children.