Quitting time

If I should die before I finish this tale, please don't me bewail

It's been a most beautiful ride and I am totally satisfied

Although I've laughed and cried, I've had nothing to hide

I always knew that when it was through

Succeed or fail no more tickets would be for sale

Reviews

[willweb]

Yep, we all have to go sometime, just hopefully not in the middle of a good write. :)

[Soren]

Thanks Will, no not in the middle of this one at least. But one never knows when. Thanks for the read.

[JD Major]

For your sake, Soren, I'm glad you're still with us, and for mine that you posted this,
as I'll keep buying until your ticket is punched :)

[Soren]

Thanks JD I never know when the conductor will come but, until then, I'll keep chugging. Thanks for the read.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sounds like Plath in her "Lady Lazarus"----

"the peanut crunching crowd filing in to see them unwrap me hand and foot"---
she was putting on a show in the arena...and tickets were expensive.
j.

[Soren]

Thank you Jacob not familiar with "Lady Lazarus" but many thoughts run the same way. Thanks for the read.

[Mk.t.g]

Wonderfully composed, Soren! I absolutely loved how you added your gratitude step-by-step. Indeed, before we quit, we want to be satisfied with our efforts.
Mk.t.g

[Soren]

Thanks so much Mk. Happiness, ours or others, is all that matter in this life. Thanks for the read.

[Mk.t.g]

You're Welcome, Soren!