Panic

A sense of urgency with no place to go

Imminence but uncertainty a notion of woe

A storm brewing no hope of subduing

Uneasiness pours through locked doors

A sixth sense alerts of an unknown foe

Creeping trepidation begins to overflow

Reviews

[JENNY]

Living in the world where 1/1 people are victim of anxiety leading to various life disorders can just imagine the whole scenario while reading. Wonderfully written Soren .

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your review and kind comments

[JENNY]

Your most welcome Soren . May you have outstanding year ahead

[JD Major]

You have a knack for zeroing in on the human experience, Soren, it seems like my default-mode is something close to what you're describing ... not so much a feeling of panic, although I know that well enough, but an enduring moment-to-moment feeling that I should be doing something else, somewhere else. ...something like your excellent first line.

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your review and kind comments, they are deeply appreciated.

[Mk.t.g]

Such a fantastic description of the different types of panic and anxiety that a person might feel! I loved this, Soren!

[Soren]

Thanks so much for your review. Excuse the delay in responding. Your kind words are deeply appreciated

[Mk.t.g]

My pleasure, Soren!

[willweb]

Anxiety and the holidays go together like ham and cheese, if you like that kind of thing. Though the right bread can be a great stress reliever...not really but it can make it all taste better.
Ok, sorry, that didn't work out like I had planned which does happen when we are stressed. I could feel this poem. Nicely done my friend.

[Soren]

Will thanks for the read and comments. Ham and cheese is ok but I'd rather have a BLT. As for bread I hope it is fresh baked. If neither of these is available I feel anxiety coming on.

[Green]

Ahh yes, the many different feelings of panic. I can't say it's nice to have it spelled out so descriptively, but it is a very familiar. I know I personally have felt more than one of these, but I never have really stopped to think about all the different forms it can take. This made me take a moment and do that, and I guess now next time I feel my anxiety building I might take a moment and try to describe it and that will help a little bit. Worth a try at least, haha.
I also liked how it kind of had an indistinct rhythm to it, or at least it did when I read it. Thank you for sharing.

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your read and comments. I empathize with you, I suppose everyone has felt anxiety at one time or another but only a few have felt true panic

[Chris Shaw]

Anyone who has suffered from panic attacks will be able to relate to the contents of this write Soren. A desperate need to escape from what you aren’t even sure of and it can be terrifying. Well penned and so descriptive.

Chris

[Soren]

Thank you Chris for your read and kind comments.

[Chris Shaw]

You are very welcome :)

[AYVID N]

Uneasiness pours through locked doors

I really appreciate the line above. It has such superb imagery.

I relate your words to my own suffering from diffuse anxiety syndrome and the vague feeling of something terrible about to happen. It once resulted in a full blown panic attack for me.

The poem has such an impact and conveys the feeling of dread so completely.

[Soren]

Thanks for the review and comments. Yes anxiety is a common thing, maybe even more so now days. I have worked with several people that have had panic attacks and they are certainly nothing anyone would want to have.