Nowhere

Once upon another time that never was

Drifting through another clime that ever does

Live a life that could not be and is a lie

Taking a break from eternity where no laws apply

I floated in dreams sublime which became

A place with no crime and no shame

Reviews

[JD Major]

Dreamy & Thoughtful, enjoyed it. ...You found Utopia, or maybe that town that only appears every 100 yrs ...Brigadoon?

[Soren]

Thank you JD as always enjoyed your comment.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Very idyllic and utopic. Kind of a pipedream that went Bollywood or Broadway, whichever floats the reader's boat.

[Soren]

Thanks for the review and comment

[John the Baptist]

Has the sound of Thomas More's "Utopia." Indeed, such places exist only in books and dreams.

[Soren]

Thank you John for your review and comment. Yes unfortunately it is so. There are a few others that I have seen reach this nirvana but the world calls them mentally ill.

[AYVID N]

I felt the truth in your words.
A place in nowhere could be the only place where there is no crime and no shame.
A different place in time and clime opens us to such different things within us, even if momentarily, even if in just dreams.
I loved where you took me with this poem.

[Soren]

Thank you for taking your time to analyze this piece You are right on target as to what my intentions were in writing it. Thanks again

[AYVID N]

It is such a pleasure Soren! You're welcome!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Is the speaker in this poem Donald Trump.
I am sure not, but he would fit as speaker for sure.
I am reminded of the Beatles' song "Nowhere Man."
I quite enjoy your writing, Soren,
j.

[willweb]

Sounds like a wonderful place to float off to. I also enjoyed "Taking a break from eternity" What a cool thought. Nice one Soren