Miss. Understanding/mind and soul agape

Miss. Understanding/mind and soul agape

A Poem by Soren

How many fans does it take to be cool?

Was it a record bass or a bass record by the pool?

Does the sewer draw a fly on a stool?

Does the match have a match? Is there a wind in the spring?

Does the watch have a watch or the telephone a ring?

Are you evening the plain or is it a plain evening?

In the game or dance did you throw a ball?

Is it only leaves that fall in the fall?

Who is it that leaves last of all?

What is left when right is right?

Do you pitch a fit in the fight?

Or refuse refuse when the fit is too tight?

A rose that rose in the pupil of a pupil is not a crop.

For sake we did cry, did you drop the last drop?

Did your sink sink or did it stop?

Did you see the dove that dove, the slaver of a slaver on his plate?

Did you make a date for the date that you ate?

Did you state your mind or mind your state?

Should I toast with toast, or take a chance?

Breath a breath, read what I read, or change my pants?

Did his entrance you entrance?

Should I intimate that you are too intimate with my chest?

Is a minute too minute a part of an hour to get the rest?

Can you bear a bear? Is an invalid ruler the best test?

Did I ask if the desert was just or too dry?

Or in your handkerchief wound on your arm a tear you did come by?,

Can you bow with a bow or tie a tie?

Can a buck buck? Does the does?

Can a duck duck? Is it too close to close?

Is there such a thing as a garden panty hose?

© 2022 Soren


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A playful gathering of words have found your poetic mind today I would say. It is strange that the English language can be so confusing when in the wrong or right context. I once wrote one about different sounds for the same spelling like: cow, mow, now, tow, sow, bow, how, low.
Nicely done my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

1 Year Ago

Thanks Will I appreciate your read and comments. The English language has always intrigued me with a.. read more
willweb

1 Year Ago

Lengthy is unnoticed when something is fun to read.



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My friend Soren. You asked many questions. As I get older. I ask few questions now. I just allow the world to fall into place. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much for the read Coyote I deeply appreciate your comments
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome my friend.
playful piece showing the craziness of our language...

is the bandage wound around the wound?

I think toasting with toast at a wedding would be interesting, because the participants might eventually be toast.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much for your read and review Jacob. Yes the English language is full of confusion and con.. read more
A really fun play on words here Soren. Language can be so playful in the right hands. Very much enjoyed your words here. Have a great day. Pleased to have stopped by.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Chris for the read and the kind words. Thanks for stopping by
I loved the word play used here. You gave my thoughts a lot of animation and imagination.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Soren

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your review and kind words. Thanks for stopping by.
AYVID N

1 Year Ago

It was such a pleasure! 🙋‍♀️
A playful gathering of words have found your poetic mind today I would say. It is strange that the English language can be so confusing when in the wrong or right context. I once wrote one about different sounds for the same spelling like: cow, mow, now, tow, sow, bow, how, low.
Nicely done my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

1 Year Ago

Thanks Will I appreciate your read and comments. The English language has always intrigued me with a.. read more
willweb

1 Year Ago

Lengthy is unnoticed when something is fun to read.

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