Frozen

Time is a cryogenic feature, from creation to damnation, for every living creature

In death's event horizon it crystalizes like snow.

No more an entity of entropy the shadow of time does slow

I thrash about in the minutes, that have been its, fragments of disorder in an entangled web like bed

A second is an eternity, as I drown in hours sped

All in one, in a sigularity time's flexability of relativity, is a function of its veloscity

Is it a creation of the mind? Whether an issue of density or gravity, across the universe it varies in kind

While here at home, pain melts a memory frozen in time

Reviews

[Elaine]

Hey I am new to the cafe and reading so many writings so forgive me if I don't have deep constructive feedback. I just have to say I love your choice and staging of words - I'm impressed, and I wish these would come to my mind so easily. "No more an entity of entropy the shadow of time does slow."
I enjoyed how the reader could picture different views of time. I felt like a swirl of options and touches of both mystery and reality were strewn about within this writing. I enjoyed reading it - thank you!

[Soren]

Thank you so much Elaine for taking your time to review and comment on this piece. Your kind words are deeply appreciated.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

It is true time heals all wounds, but pain also lingers within us and thaws slowly. And as we cling to this hurt it keeps us from evolving and learning from it. But as is the nature of time it eventually melts away and we learn to forgive or let go of the things we no longer control. A nice write Soren.

[Soren]

Thank you Carlos your words always bring up new thoughts and they are most appreciated. Forgiveness jumped right out at me since I am working on something with that theme at the moment. Scary how close those brain waves were.