Peaceless

A feeling that I can not describe is deep inside.

It ligers, ebbs and flows

I sighed, tears of blood I cried

The sadness no one knows

It breaks my heart and tears me apart

It's an anguish in my mind

I can not chart how it did start

Peace I can not find

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Not having peace of mind can really have a bearing on your life and make you constantly restless. When you don't know the cause of it, then it is worse.

Second line a typo? Iingers?

Nice little piece of brevity Soren.

Chris

[Soren]

Thank you so much Chris. You have such a wonderful way of commenting on pieces it is always most appreceiated.

[Chris Shaw]

I thank you sincerely :)

[redd Brick Keshner]

That lingering feeling, it does come and go, but it does not go away and would appear to have come from where no one can really recall. Profound and touching at the same time. Thanks for sharing.

[Soren]

Thank you Frederick I certainly appreciate your review and kind comments