What could be or not be

What could be or not be

A Poem by Soren

To judge, or not to judge, that is the decision:

Is it better to suffer deemed injustice in quietude,

Or to strike out against perceived offense?

And by doing so, do we assume omniscience to the motives of others,

Believing we know their minds and feel their hearts,

That our tears hold more salt than theirs,

That we can see both ends of the never ending causal chain of events,

Believing they should understand us, better than we understand them,

And that they should hold true what we have been taught and believe,

Making us a blind, deaf slave of our own culture, or species?

And should we error in our judgement,

What act can take away the guilt and disgrace that follows?

By opposing those that do not agree with us, do we feel redeemed,

Normalized and sanctified in our own actions,

That we are above them, that God is on our side?

Will this ease our pain and rectify the past,

Take away the sting of scurrilous words,

Give us back lost goods, return our honor,

Will it bring back the dead from the graveyards,

Bound by the chains of hate, anger and vengeance,

Trapped in the quagmire of the past, anchored by our sinking values?

Will following the cry's of the mass' free us and cleanse our hands?

Or is it better to stand alone against the winds of hell

And let the rages of the storm's debris wash over us?

In man's blindness of ignorance and the deafness of arrogance,

The answer is lost in the dark of the tempest and howling of the gale.

© 2022 Soren


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What a beautiful poem Soren. Your first two lines directed me to the teaching of Jesus Christ. Not that I am a practicing Christian. Turning the other cheek takes great courage and strength. It is easy to lash out in anger but to use restraint and prevent prolonging the hostility seems a noble thing to do. That of course, does not mean give in to aggression. What I mean is understanding the wrongs of the past, accepting what happened was wrong and moving on. If both sides of the story could do that there would be more chance of peace. Sadly some are so bitter they can and will not forgive. Your words took me in many directions. In the challenging circumstances our planet finds itself in, tolerance, understanding and a cool demeanour can go a long way in most cases.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

2 Years Ago

Chris I deeply appreciate your review and insightful comment. Thank you so much
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are very welcome dear poet. Thank you for sharing your work.



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What a beautiful poem Soren. Your first two lines directed me to the teaching of Jesus Christ. Not that I am a practicing Christian. Turning the other cheek takes great courage and strength. It is easy to lash out in anger but to use restraint and prevent prolonging the hostility seems a noble thing to do. That of course, does not mean give in to aggression. What I mean is understanding the wrongs of the past, accepting what happened was wrong and moving on. If both sides of the story could do that there would be more chance of peace. Sadly some are so bitter they can and will not forgive. Your words took me in many directions. In the challenging circumstances our planet finds itself in, tolerance, understanding and a cool demeanour can go a long way in most cases.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soren

2 Years Ago

Chris I deeply appreciate your review and insightful comment. Thank you so much
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are very welcome dear poet. Thank you for sharing your work.

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