The death of Osiris

Basking in the warmth of our relationship

I grew lazy, filled with drowsiness I napped

I did not notice the sun’s setting or waning rays

Awaking in the darkness, I shiver

unprepared for the cold of night

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

The shortness and the punctuated emotion are quite intensely satisfying to read.It reminded me of the confines of the box set by Set to lure Osiris into a coffin, which it really was... how sad to only be thrown in the dark cold waters of the Nile. Very moving piece. Thanks for sharing. Frederick

[Soren]

Thank you so much for your reading and in depth comments

[Red Brick Keshner]

Most welcome, Soren.